Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, the Short Story

My all time favorite poem is Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening by Robert Frost. As part of a writing exercise for the Creative Writers Workshop, I turned the poem into a short story. Here are both for your reading pleasure.

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Photo courtesy of Kevin Bradley Photography

Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening

By Robert Frost

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village, though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark, and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

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Ode to a Snowy Evening

by

Tony Acree

Up ahead the narrow dirt lane disappeared in the rapidly falling snow. I pulled lightly on the reigns, bringing my dappled colored horse and small sleigh to a gradual halt. Tall trees were gathered close around us, leafless silent watchmen wearing new coats of white, on guard as twilight slowly approached.

I get my bearings as best I can, and I think I know whose woods these are. The man lived in the village just passed. Did he spend time here in nature’s sublime embrace or were these woods no more than some blotters ink on a sterile accountant’s page? No matter, for I am sure he will not see me stopping here to watch while the snow–as if on some great journeys end–rushes to cover all in virgin pureness, filling his woods with mounting drifts.

I lift my head skyward and allow several fragile flakes to alight upon my face, darting around the once protective rim of my hat. They land and melt quickly, their coolness like a mother’s soft kiss remembered.

My little horse must think it queer after the distance we have traveled to stop without a farmhouse hear. No guiding light shining a beacon’s promise of warmth or hay to eat. With only the woods and a frozen lake to be seen on the darkest night of the year, he must surely wonder if it would not be more fit for him to sit in the sleigh and for me to take up halter and harness to complete our journey.

But I am mesmerized as I watch the countryside viewed through a curtain of heavenly origin while the coming night reaches out its hand to paint the scene in deepening shadows. The spaces between oaken trunks become magical realms that call to me, tempting me to pass between them like a gate to a world that mortal men only dream about. Something primordial beckons me, capturing my imagination as I drink in the timeless scene. I pull my great coat tighter as a chill winter wind gathers and caresses me, taking my breath away.

With a shake of his harness bells my equine friend breaks my reverie. And as their tinkling dies away, the only sound that can be heard is the sweep of easy wind and downy flake. He seems to  be asking if there were some mistake, some miscommunication between master and beast. With a smile of  genuine affection and some kind words I let him know there had not been. It seems the same flight of fancy that had overcome me had not had the same effect on him.

With a touch of the reigns I send us yet again down the now unbroken path of winter white. I glance once more between the bows of the ancient trees that still call out to me. The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep and miles to go before I sleep.

And miles to go before I sleep.

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